Keep coming back to the new story because each pass brings at least one unexpected improvement, but need to lay off a while until I can decide on the ending.
As luck would have it, have other work. The novel, first and foremost.
Read the last of the N stories in my queue this morning, and made good notes that should help me finish the critiques this weekend.
Worked out a little after 1:00, then went off in search of medication and groceries. Got home and started a pot of cream of cauliflower soup.
Hadn’t realized until yesterday my fishing license is good for another month. Who knows, with a little luck I might get a good day to head up into the mountains.